Life as it is!

Dialogue(some parts were improvised by the actor and actresses,this is the original dialogue)
Wife : oi! Where have you been? I waited for you to have dinner together.

Husband: hmm.. Whatever…( throws himself onto the couch)

Wife:You didn’t call me and now you come home drunk. I prepared your favourite dishes. have you eaten?

Husband: ya.. anything.
Wife: What! I’m talking to you. I…

Husband: Shut up bitch! I don’t want to listen.

Wife: What did you just call me?

Husband:I just called you a bitch. Can’t i? Bitch!Bitch! Bitch!

Wife: what? You…f..

Husband: I what?

Crash!!

WifE: Out! Out! Just get out of the house!!! You ungrateful piece of shit.

Husband: you want shit? I’ll give it to u.

Wife: Just get…
Husband: phkhaWYYbjdksys..

Wife: You are such a..

Husband: snore.snore.snore.

Wife: What the F**k

Husband: snore. Snore.

Wife: forget it.

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Dialogue
They way they say it.
Words.

Dialogue reveals character
- a character talks about himself or herself.
- -other people talk about that character.

Dialogue establishes relationships between characters.
- character express attitudes and opinions that are in opposition to one another.

Good effective dialogue will move the story forward.

Dialogue communicates faces and information to the audience.
- it conveys essential exposition
- characters wll talk about what happened, establishing the story line.
Dilogue ties the be.script together.

Common mistakes

- Dialogue should used sparingly, never telling the audience what they can see for itself.
- dialogue is no substitute for action

dialogue shoule not match conventional spoken dialogue real talking.

Visual medium.
Script is a story told in pictures.

I HAVE TO STOP IT!!! i keep coming to school late and i keep forgetting to bring my cellphone. That explains to why i’m usually late. like yesterday, i went out of my house early but i am still late. why? i left my cellphone at home.haiz…

anyways,today is the last day of school until the term break. weee…

oh yarh.nurrein and i learn something that is very important in our life. To do things earlier so that we can do it all over if something went wrong.

Group and friendship is important, however, if something were to happen within the group,it could affect the friendship and vice versa.

last of all In the real world, Whatever other give you is what u get and u can’t decline it.

Emotins are imortant in everyone’s life. If anyone is to speak monotonously i don’t think this world will be a lively place. For example i miss the noisy and joyous joshua when he was sick. I guess in this world we do need noisemakers but apropriate noisemakers. haha… From emotions which comes from people, it would create a character. From the characters emotions which is brought through what she says and hw she acts. Most importantly is what she says that wold show what kind of person she is. That is what i’ve been doing to.Listen to the way people talk and what they are sayin. ou can even know what type of person he/she is just from a few sentences.

ITs been like ages and have been going on until now. the battle of the sexes. WEll, i’m not being sexist or anything just that after using my eye power of of observation, a girl’s shirt caught my eye. It reads, ” high maintance” Then it strikes me, alot of people keep saying that Girls are high maintanance as they are very hard to maintain due to the endless wants to keep themselves prim and proper or even absolutely stunningly gorgeous. So most girls can be label as high maintanance. But can guy be labelled the same as well? no? yes? maybe? i don’t know?

Well, for me the answer is yes!!! some boys/ guys are high maintanance as well. ?Theres these new era kind of guy, the ‘metrosexuals’.They are the ones who care about fashion, looks, and being pesentable all the time. Some even go to beauty shps just to do facial and so on. THese group of guys even break the tradition of guys hate shopping. In fact, they love to shop. where? Topshop, Armani and all the other branded and well-known brands. from neat/funky hair shirts to pants to designer jeans to leather shoes. Everything must look perfect to them. Some even take hours to shop just for the right shirt.

so, who says guys hate shopping and they are not picky in fashion?

Anyways, a note to myself. Never to be late again!!! this is like the 1ooth time i’m telling myself but i’m still late, no matter what.

wk 5…The only thing i can remember strongly about this week is preparation for test.haiz…alot of test are coming up and i’m like going nuts over assignments and revision.worst still, ive got my cca to attend. Had fun during training and the training teaches me that i have to be disciplined and focus at all times.
I know. I know. I have lose all my discipline and focus during the long after o’s holiday.haha…

so well, been thinking for this week.especially after doing the visual trigger and true/false stories.Sometimes things that we see are more than the surface level. There’s always the other story that is much more interesting than the one that is being portrayed.there’s this picture of a girl that i saw and i thought she was just modelling for that shot.Her face was all scrunched up and as if she was in anger. Turn out to be, it was a candid shot and that wasn’t actually in anger. She was trying to control her tears. See how a person’s expression can be misleading?
That makes me think again, des that mean if a picture can speak a thousand words, how about people itself. Maybe someone is very bubbly and full of joy but deep inside something is hurting her. YOu’ll never know.

oh yarh this random thing that i thought of about words. been wondering. serious. PSP right, playsation portable. TO me it does not feel right i mean it feels weird to pronounce it as playstation portable. Personally, i rather it be called as PPs.Portable Playstation. Doesn’t it sounds nicer?

Reflection reflection reflection. I still see the same one each day. Nothing much change. But the difference between friday’s reflection and the other days is that Friday’s reflection are words and the other days reflection is my face.

oh yarh. TO T1B2. I love you guys and we have really bonded well.

Greek Tragedy:
-imitation of an action (mimesis) that is serious, complete and of a certain magnitude; in language established with each kind of artistic ornament; in form of action with narrative;
incidents arousing pity and fear, where to accomplish its kartharsis of such emotions.

The 6 factors of a story:

1.
Plot- arrangements of incidents, not the story itself.
2. Character- second place in importance. The characters support the plot

3. Thought- where something is proved to be or not to be. Or a general maxin is enunciated. When there is character growth.

4. Diction- expression of words which are proper and appropriate to the plot, character and the end of the tragedy.

5. Sound/melody- musical elements of the chorus.

6. Spectacle- special effects. Production of spectacular effects depends more on the art of the stage machinist than on that of the poet. Least important.

The “Cause & Effect” chain:

4 types of causes:
a. material cause (what something is made of)
b. Motive/ efficient cause
c. Formal cause
d. Final cause (realise formal cause)
Definition of cause: a chain effect where whatever happens in scene A leads to scene
B.
How can a good plot create “Unity of Action”
⇒ No action/scene is to be a digression; nothing is left inside temporarily in speech and writing. Every word and action must contribute.
A Film’s Beginning, Middle and End
The beginning
- Start and cause the effect chain
The middle
- Climax
- Caused by earlier incidents
The end
- Resolution
- Caused by preceding events that cant lead to other incidents
- The end should resolve problems caused during incintive moments
The
Episodic Plot
- The only thing tying together events in such a plot is the fact that they happen to that same person

Characters in a Tragedy
- must be rich and famous
- they support the plot
- personal motivation are connected to the cause-and-effect chain.
- not necessary bad, but are flawed in some particular way

The 3 Act Structure
Act One/ Prepare the Audience : Characters are introduced. Conflict is shown. Audience knows the main problem in the story. Usually starts at an exciting note.

Act Two: Conflict is deepened. Climax at this point. Most important act. Initial is complicated. Main character must try to solve the problem. The adversaries must always be in action, trying to thwart the hero’s plans. In Act Two, the Hero reaches his lowest point.

Act Three: The conflict is solved, and there is a conclusion.

I got to know a new guy. Wish i coulde get to know him better. Does anyone can grant me the wish? Fairies? Fairygodmother? haha…NO one can help me. can i cry.?? tsk..tsk.. IF only he is ever alive again, i could learn from him straight rather than rely on the internet which can either be right or wrong and high chances of it to be wrong.Personally, sometimes i really do not trust the internet.you can never know what’s right or wrong. So, back to the guy,his name is Aristotle. A greek guy. To me his achievement in being able to list out the techniques to a proper stry is just superb.If we follow his way of writting, i guess our story would just be magnific.

So anyways, i always see tragedy that has to come to someone dying and that’s it. But there’s more to it. To think of it its true that tragedy should only happen to a rich man as if a tragedy occurs to a poor guy, how much lower can he go? below than the poverty that he has now? How low is that? Pity man. I think that poor guy would wish that he is better off being dead than being alive as he has to go through such tragedy.

Greek is the in thing for me now. haha…well, i find the words have wonderful sounds like perpetia and anagnorisis. Its not the usual kind of language that people would take up now.But i think others should consider it to be one of the languages as its also the main language and the reason to why the other language are present now.

People.People.People. The word people sometimes can make you think, who is people? what is people? why do you even call them people? Well, hat’s what i’ve been hearing wherever i go. ” hey people, listen up..” ” hey people hurry” ” hey people can you guys like shut up for a minute?” people everywhere. Is it just a lingo to the teens or is it just to generalize everyone there. I’m wondering you see. I mean there’s the slang like “hey peeps” or even ” hey guys” But why choose peolpe. Its as if you are just calling out to any random PEOPLE out there. Seriously, think about it. Isn’t people just a noun to classify both men and women? so why use it to call like a whole group of your friends or your groupmates?

well… off with my reflection.ooh..that reminds me, i have another assignment for mr Ryan. Tragedy piece. Hmm.. what shall i write?? about people? haha…
the weeks are just getting better and assignments are getting tougher.

Crystal a girl dress in her black jacket with bright yellow stripes and paired it up with a beige pants that fits snuggly onto her which shows her full curvy butt. She orders a cup of hot mocha by the counter at Starbucks.She lean onto the counter top with one hand supporting on her chin and the other resting on the counter top.She picks up her hot mocha and sits at a table opposite to a man who is drinking his own latte.Crystal sips her hot mocha gently and wipe the sides of her mouth after every sip.Her actions is being watch by the man.
The man stands up and walk to crystal.
“Hey there.Do you mind if i sit with you just for a small chat?” The man says to crystal. Crystal just nods her head.As the man begins to sit down, Crystal notice that the guy has a big butt. She gives a small snort to hold her laughter.
“By the way, I’m Chandi.You are?” Chandi ask crystal.
“Crystal.” She reply to chandi bluntly.
They just sat there and stares at each other.Until Chandi ask for crystals phone number.Crystal gives him her phone number and a small smile. Chandi walks away soon after getting her number.
That night,Chandi call Crystal and they chat till the wee hours of the morning.
AS weeks pass by,Chandi felt that he is falling in love with CRystal and decides to confess his love for her.They meet at their first meeting place,starbucks.
Chandi went on his knees and pour out all his heart contents.After confessing Crystal looks at him with a very wide eye and slaps him hard on his cheeks. “Hey chandi. who do you think you are? You have a butt that is bigger than your head and you are in love with me? dream on.” CRystal shouts at him and walks away.Chandi ran out of the starbucks following crystal.He grabs hold of her hand and pull her close to him.He whisper into her ears,”Crystal please don’t lie to yourself.I love you for who you are and actually also because of your butt.”
Crystal looks away and struggles to set herself free.She run all the way to the bus stop and cry.
Chandi sits beside her and rub her shoulders.soon,Crystal sinks into chandi’s arms and even cry harder.Crystal tells chandi how she felt for him and would love to be with him because of his huge butt.But she can’t as her parents would disallow her to marry a man with huge butt. Chandi consoles her and tells her that her parents would change their mind upon knowing him.

Crystal and Chandi takes the risk and meet Crystal’s parents. Upon seeing Chandi,Crystal’s mum screams hysterically and chase him out of the house but Chandi did not budge.Instead he tells Crystal’s parents that he promise to take care of her well and make sure that she has all the necessities. Chandi even told her that its due to his butt that he gets thousands dollars each month just for an undergarment modelling.His butt is his means of finance. Crystal smile at him and then look at her mum.
” What? thousands of dollars just by taking a picture of your butt in an underwear?” Crystal’s mum says in shock and excitement. She smiles widely to her husband and to crystal.She gets hold of Chand’s and Crystal’s hand and put it together then she nods her head to show her aproval.Chandi and Crystal gets together after a whole of butt affair.

Wk 3 notes
First person to writea structured story : Aristotle

Mindless looking distinctive,new events
Showering
In the train,bus
Familiar moment

true observation
Watching lousy movies
emotional attachment

Reflection
Week 3 lesson really makes me think. i mean really. i use to look at certain things and then after walking for a few steps i would say to myself,”hmm,where did i see the word baby on board just now?” after thorough thinking i would see a vivid picture of a car with the yellow sticker ‘baby on board’. Mindless looking or true observation? haha..i myself have no idea. i mean i look at a certain thing once through but then i’ll try to remember where i see it and then straight away the picture would flash in my mind vividly. anyone knows which one is it?This weeks lesson also taught me that how the power of observation can help us alot. usually our daily routine is true observation, that turns to mindless looking after a few daes or weeks. but does that mean it apply in class as well? i mean sometimes students will ‘pay attention’ in class. but after the class they find that they didnt even understand a single thing and they did not remember anything that was being thought.is it just not paying attention or were they mindlessly looking. ithink they were just mindlessly looking.why? because if they say they did not even rmember a single thing then its a lie..they might have remember a part of it even though only 10% of the lesson as our brain would still capture a few things even though we aren’t paying attention to it.enough of all this looking. in conclusion,our eyes look and our brain stores. that my final judgement.

This week we did a story from someone else’s beginning.In my opinion,to write a story by using another person’s opening is easier than doing it from scratchas normally the beginning is the toughest to do. even though the plot or idea of the stoy that the original writer wants to write is different from my story.it is still relevant as we can see that there can be a lot of different ideas just from a simple beginning. This makes me think that even in stories we hav to think out of the bow and to think of the different perceptions and ideas that is relevant to ake a story good and sometimes readers may not like our stoy is due to the different idea that they had in mind upon reading the beginning or even the opposite of this.

Central feature

Character
Plot
= Conflict

Smooth continuation
Climax
Organization

The role of conflict

Conflicts is the central feature of the screenplay
-Man against man
-Man against environment
-Man against self

-It’s variation of sex, age, religion and culture, which provide variety to the conflict.

Conflict=change

Change is common to everyone
Change is universal
Bodies change
Seasons change
Lives change
Relationships change
Feelings change
Locations change
Technologies change

As universal as change may be, people often resist it for fear
Of the unknown.
People must learn to cope with change if they want to survive.
The action in drama depends on conflict.

Definition of conflict
Clashes between agreement and disagreement.
Opposition of persons or forces.
It is the interaction of opposing ideas, Interests or wills and creates the plot.

Plot cannot be constructed without conflict.
As your characters attempt to reach their goals, they come into conflict with each other.
The end of the story nears when the protagonist and antagonist approach their goals and the conflict rises to generate maximum suspense and excitement.